Not easy to state the change you made.
If I'm alive now, then I was dead,
Though, like a stone, unbothered by it,
Saying but according to habit.
You didn't just toe me an inch, no-
Nor leave me to set my small bald eye
Skyward again, without hope, of course,
Of apprehending blueness, or stars.
And I slept like a bent finger.
The first thing I saw was sheer air
And the locked drops rising in dew
Limid as spirits. Many stones lay
Dense and expressionless round about.
I didn't know what to make of it.
I shone, mica-scalded, and unfolded
To pour myself out like fluid
Among bird feet and the stems of plants.
I wasn't fooled. I knew you at once.
Tree and stone glittered without shadows.
My finger-length grew lucid as glass.
I started to bud like a March twig:
An arm and a leg, an arm, a leg.
From stone to cloud, so I ascended.
Now I resemble a sort of god
Floating through the air in my soul-shift
Pure as a pane of ice. It's a gift.
Written by other-worldly Sylvia Plath
Oh! I utterly adore this poem.
If I'm alive now, then I was dead. Though,
ReplyDeletelike a stone unbothered by it.
The first thing I saw was sheer air...
Among bird feet and the stems of plants.
I wasn't fooled. I knew you at once.
From stone to cloud, so I ascended.
Now I resemble sort of a god
Floating through the air in my soul-shift.
Pure as a pane of ice. It's a gift.
The realm that Sylvia moves in is incredible.
For this is just how one feels, if one is
lucky enough or can hope/have faith enough.
She wrote a magnificent poem here, she pours herself out in the words too.
ReplyDeleteSecretia
Yes, Secretia. Sylvia's poetry draws me in
ReplyDeletebecause of this metaphysical quality that is
combined with a concrete knowing.
Thank you!
Adorable, YES it is...
ReplyDeleteThanks for choosing it for you ... and us!
;)
Hi Dulce, happy you enjoyed this poem.
ReplyDeletethere are some exquisite lines in this poem ... these two are my favourites:
ReplyDeleteIf I'm alive now, then I was dead
And I slept like a bent finger
thanks for sharing.
JP/deb
Hello Jane,
ReplyDeleteYes, I'm having a gratifying time
reading Sylvia Plath, especially enjoying
some of her poems I haven't read in college.
I slept like a bent finger -I chuckled
ReplyDeleteIn this poem there seem to be some references to the Easter-resurrection story?? (since I am Dutch, I'm not versed in the English authors/poets)
Hello Jeannette,
ReplyDeleteYes, possibly the ascending could echo
the Easter resurrection. I just enjoy Sylvia's
ethereal quality in her writing.
Thank you, Jeannette.
It's so amazing. It makes me hurt inside.
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree Sylvia has this talent for
ReplyDeletedistilling pain until it turns into this
vaporous form surrounding your being.
There's millions of blogs out there.That have sense, why are you following mine? Mine isn't good enough.
ReplyDeleteYour blogs are lovely and honest, Butterfly.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, I found your blog over at Talli Rolands and I'm glad I took a moment to visit such an amazing blog. Beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteHi Jen, thank you for the visit and the
ReplyDeletekind compliment. I will be by to visit you
very soon.
Plath's poems are so vivid.
ReplyDeleteHello Julia,
ReplyDeleteYes, Sylvia was so talented her words
continue to resonate. Her vision and perceptions are utterly unique.
Thank you, Julia.